Disclaimer: All the names used are fictitious, nothing personal to anyone living or dead....

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‘Life is full of surprises, no one knows what happens next…’

*It’s a unsolved mystery, it unfolds in tiny pieces and the people who are able to understand those pieces are the ones who are successful in their life….*

Abhinash tries to solve his puzzled life…
Lately, Red Level has been his best friend…friend of sorrow and joy…the only friend he can trust on…who is always supportive and helpful…who is always there for Abhinash, the only one who listens to him…cries with Abhinash…laughs with Abhinash….

*What don’t I have? Good luxurious life in America, a dream come true career in IBM, opportunities to go abroad and enhance my expertise and experience, a good wife…*

Good wife…Every time Abhinash thinks about his life, he gets stuck in his wife…

‘Tyo bachha haru laai sutaaa na oie, kati chyau chyau gareko, dikkai laagney gari…’ he shouted at his wife…

Nirjala was an educated girl from a respected family. She did her masters before coming to US with Abhinash. A decent girl, loyal to her husband…dedicated her life as a housewife to her husband and 6 children. She never in her life…not even for a moment thought about another guy…never spoke a single word against her husband. She was a perfect wife, every guy wanted.

*Bichari Nirjala, what did she do wrong to me???...* Abhinash asked himself

Trying hard to find one flaw in Nirjala, Abhinash empties the glass of scotch.

Abhinash, as every other individual, came to US with a dream…a dream to be successful…a dream to become something in his life…

*What would be Anjali doing right now…???*

Anjali…the girl Abhinash always loved and still does, the love of his life, the girl he always wanted…he tries his best to find her in Nirjala, yet another unsuccessfull attempt….

He fills his glass again…

‘Baba, ghar bata phone aako thiyo bihana, hajur hidey pachi, mom ley gariseko…’ Nirjala passes the message.

Abhinash looks at Nirjala’s face, and tries to avoid her eyes. Since the day he married Nirjala, he tries to avoid her eyes full of questions…he has no answer to her questions.

*Babu, sarai ramri kt chey, ramro ghar parivaar ko, byawahaarik chey kt…hamro ichha chai, tailey tehi kt laai biha gar bhanney ho…*
His mom’s words are still in his mind. How can they ever get out of his mind???

He at first rejected this marriage proposal, and forwarded his relationship with Anjali, but…..
His family rejected it, COMPLETELY

sorry i didnt get it??????? who?what ?where ?...........is more comming??????

He still remembers the day he talked to his parents about Anjali…a nice girl from a different cast…lower cast was his mom’s version then….

‘Mom, yo 21st century maa pani k jaat ko kura laai samaatera baseko??, sansaar kaha bata kaha pugi sakyo, hajur haru ko chai ajhai tehi cha, kahiley change huney haami?’

After a silence…

‘Jindagi mero baachnu cha, nirnaya mailey po garnu parney, kun kt sanga mero jindagi bitauney bhanney mero po ichha huncha ta…’

‘Mom, I have to live with who makes me happy…’ Abhinash tried to argue

‘…and what about, what makes us happy???’ instantly replied his mom

The finishing touch of a very heated argument…

‘Babu, hami ley tero laagi tetro garem, talai hurkayem, badhyem, padhyem, k matra garenam…tero sabai ichha pura gardim…aaja hamro yeuta ichha pani pura gardainas ta??’

‘Tailey tero maanlaagi garis bhaney, ta haami buda budi nai jhundera mardincham...’

He still remembers every single word his mom said…

*Why did mom called in the morning, she knows I’d be at work…* Abhinash tried to find answer himself…

‘Kina phone gareko rey, sodhinas tailey?’ Abhinash asked Nirjala in a rough tone…

Everytime he talked to Nirjala…unknowingly or may be sometimes knowingly, he used this weird tone. It’s not what he wanted…but couldn’t help it either.

‘Khasai testo jaruri ta hoina, tesai k cha kaso cha bhanna laai gareko rey…’ Nirjala answerd

She’s been used to it now. His behaviour towards her, the way he talks to her, the way he treats her…she sometimes wants to cry loud, but cannot…with a hope that one day her husband will change…with a hope that he will love her someday.

contd.......

harkeDai :-)

:).. A Grand welcome back!! harkeDai...(:
keep writing..:)

Oops :P thanx juggy bro :D....

contd.....
‘Nirjala, I married to you only because my parents wanted me to…’
She looked at him, with mixed feelings and emotions…any other girls would have left him the same night, but….it was Nirjala…she was different.

Ignoring her feelings and emotions, he continued…. ‘I love a girl, I did, I do now, and I always will…and no one else can replace her…’

Not even realizing…or may be not even considering what that would mean to her, he left her alone that night…

Nirjala’s marriage life started with a broken heart…broken into tiny pieces...which could never be healed…not until her last breath.

‘Babu…aba ta naati ko mukh pani herna maan laagyo…’ The first demand his mom made, when she came to visit America.

His marriage itself was being a burden for him, the relationship he could never accept. It was merely a acceptance of his parents’ demand. There was no fault in Nirjala…it was him, who could not accept her in his life.

‘Tailey pahila biha gar, aru kura ta bhai haalcha ni…aafai hundai jaancha babu…’ a very confident prediction every one made.

He never thought, he could do that….but…he accepted it as a fate of life, who never believed in fate, he was bound today, bound by the time, bound by the family, bound by the society. He could not break through it

A life he was living for his parents, not knowing what he wanted…OR…suppressing his feelings and emotions, compromising…with what he wanted.

In this life full of compromise, he compromised one more time…his mom wanted a grandson (nati).

Six more compromises, but she didn’t get a nati. He now is a proud father of six daughters…the question is, is he really proud of it??? The question he was never able to answer and could never be answered.

contd....

harkeDai :-)

i am soo into the story..

married a girl that a mother chose and is rude to her :-O :-O
that's messed up

Cerineeeeeeeeeee.... long time :)....how u been doing :)....

contd.....
‘Baba, Babu ko phone cha…’ Nirjala hands him the phone

Babu, very interesting character in his life, he has been always supportive of whatever Abhinash does. His brother…

Known for his silent but revolutionary behavior, he has to get what he wants in his life, lives the way he wants. Married an white American, daughter of a well known businessman, inherited the business. At first parents were little upset, but accepted it.

‘Dai, baau aama bhaneko testai ho, do what you think is good, you are the only one who knows yourself…’ Babu told him, long time ago…

‘Aaja risauchan, bholi thik hunchan, parsi sabai kura swikar garchan…’ he added

‘Tara baau aama ko chitta pani ta kasari dukhauney ni….?’ Abhinash forwarded his question

‘Dai, hajur ko k cha, phone pani garisinna…’ his brother answerd to his Hello!!!!
‘Hoina, alik busy thiye, kaam maa’ a fake answer, but effective enough
‘Ghar bata mom ko phone aako thiyo, malai’ his brother continued
‘ani….’
‘Ghar parivar ko kuro bhayo, aru ta k hunu, they are worried about you…’
‘Mom said, she ruined your life….’ His brother paused
*complete quietness*
‘Dai, she’s hurt more now, to see the way you are now, hearing about you every time, seeing you every time…’
‘She still says, she shouldn’t have made that decision for you…’

‘It was my fate….’ Abhinash answered

‘Dai it was not your fate, it was your decision, it was your choice, you wanted to keep them happy and now no one is….’

Abhinash is amune to all these, his feeling are numb, it sometimes feels like he is a dead body walking on the street.

The conversation went on for a while…

‘Its too late now….and I have to do few things…ma talai bholi, parsi tira phone garchu…’ Abhinash hung up the phone

contd....................

harkeDai :-)

what the hell was this dude doing till he had six daughters? he married a girl and have six kids and still rude to his wife all the time? i wonder why his wife in this story did not learn to move on with her life here in the US?

i knowwwww!!!

this story better have a good ending where the wife kicks him :-D

kicks in the nuts ho kya :P hehehe..... i'll try to post it by tonite....gotta go rite now :(

:-D

यो कथाको पुरुष पात्रलाइ दिने कुनै उपनाम नै छैन।निर्जलाल्को के गल्ति छ र यो विनाश बाबुको सनकको सजाय भोग्नु पर्ने।६ छोरिको आमा तेसै कुनै निर्णयमा पुग्नु पनि भएन,तेस्मा पनि नेपालि माटोमा हुर्केकि नेपालि छोरि।

जे होस् त्यो विनाश बाबु चाहि विरामि र छ क्या।।यस्तालाइ भन्छन् लिङ्ग भएको नपुंसक।।

>> यस्तालाइ भन्छन् लिङ्ग भएको नपुंसक।।
now that just made me burst out in laughter ... :)

good story though, like many here i have a few questions like why is nirjala still with him, or why let him procreate 6 daughters, blah blah blah ...

im liking what im reading, so im waiting for the continuation ;)

cheers !

Good one!!I wonder what the ending would be like??

I heard that question few times....she is still with her husband because of what she is. A girl grown up in a nepali culture, tradition. She has a lotta expectation from her family. She also holds the name of her family. A girl who is completely commited to her husband and family.

The daughters was because, his mom wanted a son....

Its only to show how much she was commited to her husband and her family.

harkeDai :-)

Good story..let me say it this way.... good start of a very good story. ...Looking forward to the best ending.

Keep writing Harke Dai!!

:-)

best best best ending... of course
if u know what i mean
lol

ok i am bored ...

contd....

He looks at the bottle…its empty…the clock hits 10:50…its quiet.

*Most probably Nirjala put kids to sleep…*

Abhinash goes into the bedroom…

*How beautiful she looks, may be she had dreams, dream of a happy family…dream of a loving husband…dream of a small and loving family…dream of being cared… and…and where did I put her today*

Abhinash drinks the final few drops left in his glass…

*Its all because of me…I ruined her life…I am the one responsible…what right did I have to ruin a girls life…just because to make my parents happy…and what happened now…what do I have now…are my parents happy now???*

Abhinash, gets his car key…and leaves….

*I am worse than a murder, I made her life a living hell…I suffocated her…Anjali was right…I was not selfish thinking bout my life…I was selfish, wanting to see my parents smile…who gave me right to ruin a innocent girls life…where did I go in my life…what did I give my parents in life…a life full of my and my wifes tears…that’s not what they wanted either…they wanted to see me laughing and smiling…am I smiling today?? When did I last see Nirjala laugh or even…smile….what did those innocent children do to me…why do I dislike them…when did I hug them last time…when was the last time I talked to Nirjala warmly???...*

Ring!!!! Ring!!!! Ring!!!!

Doorbell wakes up Nirjala…It’s a little past midnight…Abhinash is not in the bed….

*May be he left to get…..*

It’s a usual activity for Nirjala

‘Hajur laai katti bhanney, drink garera drive nagarisyo bhanera….’ Says Nirjala, Half awake….

‘Hello!!!......’

‘Mr. Ab-i-nash Sap-ko-ta….’ One of the two cops tries hard to pronounce it correct
‘That’s my husband…What happened ???’ Scared, Nirjala counter questions them

‘A Grey Toyata Camry, TJX 845….’ The other officer tried to explain….

‘OMG!!!!!!!’ Shouts Nirjala, expecting the worse…

She faints on the ground.....


End

harkeDai :-)

good morning harke dai .............. didnot sleep too much???

Damn dude ...
I feel really bad for Nirjala now ....
Now shes stuck with 6 kids all by herself in the states ...
and she has not been working, cause she wanted to devote her time to the family ...
god knows how she is gonna survive ...
Poor Nirjala ...