Hi, my dear frens, i have posted my new poem here for u people who love nepali poem. I hope that you really like it and give some comments/suggestions and feedbacks. I generally write poems and this time, with the use of nepali unicode, i have typed it.I recommend it for you also because it makes easy to write anything that has never been so easy. You have to install nepali fonts to read my poem
Thanking You.with best wishes

हेर्ने धोको मर्या छैन तमीलाई जति देखेपनि
तिम्रो मेरो बिछोढ कथा भाग्यमानै लेखेपनि

तिम्रालागि मैले मेरा सारा नाता तोडी हिने
बाबु आमा दाजु भाई सारा घर नै छोडी हिने

हिलोहरुको बिचमा तिमिलाई स्वच्छ सफा कमल ठाने
पुसमाघको न्यानो घाम झै हजारबीचमा तिमिलाई छाने

तर प्यारको बदला प्यार पाऊने आसा मेरो मरि गयो
तिम्रा मेरा खुसिहरु दैवले नै हरी गयो

जिउन गार्हो छैन यहा, मर्न गार्हो तिमीलाई भुली
सारा जीवन जिउनै पर्यो ?मगन्ते? झै यसै डुली
हेर्ने धोको मर्या छैन तमीलाई जति देखेपनि
तिम्रो मेरो बिछोढ कथा भाग्यमानै लेखेपनि

ok, i can understand your view but sometimes, you can not enjoy alone.If u could give enjoyment to other people also, then, it might be the good one.think about ur poem and try to improve it so that one day, u will be happy coz others will be happy due to u

There are many people in Sajha who just criticize whatever you do but u have to do whatever u think is correct.....
Enjoy Buddy

"but sometimes, you can not enjoy alone."

yeah, and i do other stuff with other ppl.... but sometimes, i do something for myself...... that aint being selfish.. its just like you said.. doing something that i like....

One who can die,

remember what i posted right after your poem-post. I know someone wanted it to be removed and it is not there anymore, which is again not my site. so they can do what ever they want. but i had warned you and told you exactly what to expect if it was your first try here at sajha and you got it. Truth is bitter bhanya jasto

I mentioned of a Vicious circle. Be patient and keep on trying and keep on posting, and the day you get better, these same folks lashing at you right now as the Gajal and poem emperors will bow to you.

One important thing, when you post something and if people do not reply or post or comment, learn to take it as it is and ignore. Also if people do comment ignore it, too with a mind of "Same dukhe suke kritwa labha labhau jaya jayau" or remain calm at times of sorrow and happiness

Similarly when you write, dont ask for comments or " tapailai kasto lagyo" stuff. Just write. when you write hoping people will like it and praise it, you wont be able to express your real self. my expereice. Dont expect anything from anyone. Remember , Karma gara fal ko aasha nagara.

you will do great

I know someone is going to request my post again be removed, but what the heck.

abu chakman... THANK YOU, THANK YOU...... Listen to him... thank you again....

yes chakman................u were right...........I did not have any enthusism to get praised or something like that,,,,,but natural instinct it was that i tried to ask some comments.It's ok .neither does it matter for me wat others think or do..................i will keep on writing and posting poem here.I hope may be small, but that community constantly read my poem.Thank u for ur comments...................Now, i should be that man who dares to tease the mahuri or aringgal.let's see that jhunda and golo of aringwal .kasari yhry will react to my every actions.................I do not except any omments from those tral shits who jus talk u read but not write................."LEKHANATH PAUDEL KO KAKA LE PANI LEKHNATHE LAI TA NATHE LE K LEKHACHHAS BHANEKO THIYO ARE".....SIKCHHA TA MA LEKHNATH KO JIWANI BAT LINA SAKCHHU.............MA KINA "NEPE CHEPE" HO WA K JATI LE K BHANLAN BHANERA MATLAB GARU HAINA TA?
Guys, u will see here my constant writing irrespective of some people's pleasure.They think that they are the diggaz and think that i tried to break their sovereignity..."
hahahahahaha

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