Guys Check this Poem,
The first eva poem i jotted down as i was getting back to US.As a matter of fact,i spent a week as a vacation at Bangkok.U guys know whaaatchha i'm talkin abt,don't ya???????????

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I touched her hands with the emotional beat,
felt the blood running towards the feet,
mouth watered and face disguised,
a sticky liquid on the palm felt.
Steadily,she surrounded my hips,
i controlled my feelings,but was in vain
nevertheless,I was in Pain.
Running down her cheeks,
i came towards her lips,
satisfactorily, started "Lusting"
as if i was made for it.
Moving down the hips came across the MISTRY,
"only 100$s"quoted she,
i was lost in my deepest love,
but she turned out to be the negative.
I blamed guilty myself
coz,she was in my compassion,
she couldnt understand my severe love
she went towards the middle of the ocean leaving me on the beach.

Copyright ©2006 Ashish Da

Regards
Ashish Da

I did ponder upon yr poem & It's not bad as 1st timer,but was hard to figure out what emotions U were goin thru? U could be either tryin 2 nurse yr broken Heart with a substitute of Baajaru Aaurat & feeling Sorry 4 her @ the same time or U are infatuated with this person,who U came in contact with,who is oblivious of yr feelings..... Nevertheless, even it's the case, Time heals all wounds, Ashish!

Hi Ashish!
Pls do forgive me if I've Misinterpretted yr Poem... just wrote down whatever came 2 my mind - Sorry!